In the first chapter of Raw Desires, Eirene Ours aka Cadet arrives on Taytu’s home planet.
The leader of the Rebel Cyborgs tries to speak our heroine’s language. She doesn’t use contractions or sentence fragments. Her chatter is extremely stiff and formal.
Because Eirene Ours learned the language from the databases, not from the locals.
When I learned French in school, I was taught very formal Parisian French. It wasn’t the Quebecois street slang we used outside of school. The two versions of French were extremely different and often communication issues would happen due to these differences.
Language evolves quicker than textbooks and databases can match. I keep that in mind when I travel and when I write characters from different cultures.
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Raw Desires
His human female is attempting to kill him.
This cyborg finds that adorable.
Raw, a K model cyborg, is one of the lucky warriors who has located his genetic match. He hears his human female’s voice over the communication lines and immediately processes she is his.
Winning her affections will be a greater challenge. Battle has always been Raw’s focus. The rough-and-tough warrior has no idea how to engage anyone’s tender emotions.
Fortunately, he isn’t alone in the universe. His unmatched male friends help him craft a plan.
All Raw has to do is relay a few unsettlingly sweet words to his female and give her the thoroughly unfunctional wall decoration he has obtained. He projects she will then jump into his big, strong arms and beg him to claim her.
Taytu isn’t jumping anywhere. She has one mission—kill every cyborg in existence.
The huge, handsome male traveling to meet with her is her first target. His rough hands, firm lips, and sparkling, energy-infused eyes won’t save him from her vengeance. She has trained vigorously for this moment, and she won’t fail at her assigned task.
The cyborg will die.
Raw Desires is an enemies-to-lovers Cyborg SciFi Romance set in a dark, gritty, sometimes-violent universe.
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