I was deep into the first draft of B Free, the fourth story in the Rebel Cyborgs series (releasing in November), and I realized it wasn’t working. I had started telling the story in the wrong place (too far into the action) and from the wrong POV (it should have started with B’s thoughts).
I started over.
Not completely over, of course. I was able to re-use a few scenes with some heavy tweaking. But that took me almost as long as writing a fresh scene.
It hurt. I won’t sugar coat it. I’m writing this post over a week later because I didn’t have the heart to write it sooner. It was too painful.
But it was needed. The story works now. The words are flowing. I feel good about it. It will be a stronger, more entertaining, tighter story because I started over.
Don’t be afraid to start over.
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Under Strain
A damaged cyborg warrior is hunted by a peace-loving human female.
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Strain is severely malfunctioning. The D Model cyborg was the sole survivor after a horrific decision was made by his cruel manufacturers. He hates all humans, and when he attacks one who is under his cyborg leader’s protection, he is reprimanded, stripped of his weapons, and told to watch and not actively participate in the next mission.
That mission takes place on a small remote planet. Its lush terrain should only be inhabited by the cyborgs they were sent to rescue, but Strain senses another presence on the surface. She is watching him, tracking him, hunting him.
A fully operational cyborg would end her lifespan.
Strain wants to claim her. Forever.
Kamyelle is the only one left of her kind. Warriors have killed the other nonviolent human inhabitants of her planet. She survived…barely…by hiding in the trees, observing her enemies, and covering herself with lifeform scan-concealing mud.
When a handsome, gray-skinned, brilliant-blue-eyed male arrives, surrounded by weapon-carrying warriors, she has to save him. Warriors harm and they kill. That is what they do.
She won’t allow them to hurt Strain.
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Under Strain is a STANDALONE Cyborg SciFi Romance set in a dark, gritty, sometimes-violent universe.
It features a broken warrior, a human female who thinks he’s perfect, and velociraptor-like dinosaurs who view them both as light, tasty snacks.
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